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« on: April 08, 2011, 14:51:10 »
hello guys   :)  don't crucify me for what i'm going to say now, but i find our forum a little boring lately with all those old questions and bands topic being up all the time, without a single trace of new topics  *angel eyes*  so, i came up with this idea already a while ago when i did it myself, but wasn't sure if it's good to bring the topic to life. i decided to give it a try anyway.

the point of the topic is that someone, let's say person X posts a picture. person Y writes a story, or a poem, or just a simple thought, a feeling about the photo person X posted, and then this person Y also adds a new photo. person Z posts his/her story about the picture from person Y and posts another photo, and then person W writes blahblahblahblah   :D   got it?   :D   it's not that difficult   :)

so, to start it with an example, i will put here a photo and a story i wrote about it




i close my eyes. my tears run down my cheeks and die on the cold pavement under my feet. i cannot move on. the pain i feel inside has carved me to the ground. i drop on my knees and cry. cold autumn wind tries to dry my face, but nothing can make me stop grieving. my world has collapsed. my life is gone ... he is gone ... my time has stopped along with his. why him? why not me, why him? life is so unfair ... he just left me here, alone; breaking the promise he made. he will always and forever stay with me, he said ... bullshit! he couldn't have known what was going to happen. but still i believed ...

i look upon the cemetery behind the fence. can't get closer, it hurts too much. i miss his presence ... but he's there, few steps away. he's there, so close. not breathing. not feeling. his eyes are closed forevermore. he's so ... different. calm. sleeping for eternity ... it's not like him ... this life is so cruel!

memories hurt. spirit of the glowing morning dawn. summer twilight. light warm breeze. gentle wind and pouring rain ... everything's gone, covered with pain ...

i love you, i whisper ...
never again ...




next person has to write a story/poem/thought about this photo:  



don't forget, after you write a story about this photo, you also show another picture you want to know the story about   ;)
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« Reply #1 on: April 09, 2011, 08:51:28 »
nobody?   :(   yeah well, as expected ...
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« Reply #2 on: April 09, 2011, 09:15:02 »
You have to wait a little bit, Klo!  :)
Noch immer brennt in mir dein Licht

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« Reply #3 on: April 09, 2011, 09:35:50 »
Nice topic I have just seen ^^
Well, I don't feel like writing a story, but yes a thought....

"it seems that my life doesn't deserve any light.....
I have had, have and will have lights....but they won't last forever....
The light of love should be eternal, but once and twice and so on I realice that it's weak, so weak and can be switched off so quickly and sudden....."


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« Reply #4 on: April 09, 2011, 23:46:39 »
Great topic Klo!! :)I really enjoy this idea!
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Ripples slowly caress the sea water
a fading sun lingers behind the clouds.
Before this time
I saw a lit path in the water-
light that I thought might lead me to you.
I impatiently paced amongst the shore
awaiting to saunter
into waters mysteriously still and deep.
The light only disappeared to cruelly remind me
that you oppose my nature.
And so the sand continues burying me in
as I await for the Northern breeze to carry my heart away
and disperse me through time.





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« Reply #5 on: April 10, 2011, 00:49:29 »
Let's try it... But I won't rhyme =)

I'm still here, just where you left me...
You took my heart, you took my soul
But you will never take my violin of me!
It's my Breath, just like I called it
So long time ago already
When you were listening my music
Between all those flowers of Spring

You tried to take them as well...
So actually I'm so sorry for you, my dear
Because I'm still watching all those petals
That are coming to me
Each warm morning of my life
To take care of me with such affection
I'm still here, but I'm not waiting anymore.

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« Reply #6 on: April 10, 2011, 01:10:00 »
Steph: I really loved your interpretation!! Very VERY original. :)


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« Reply #7 on: April 11, 2011, 00:12:40 »
Quote from: "anesthesia25"
Steph: I really loved your interpretation!! Very VERY original. :)


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Thank you!!!!



Come on, LacriWeltians! This topic is perfect for this forum and I totally agree with Klokloklo! Let's keep with this =)
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« Reply #8 on: April 11, 2011, 08:11:04 »
so great, everyone      :)     will read them all when i'm not on my phone and when i'm home^^
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« Reply #9 on: April 11, 2011, 08:29:24 »
@Klodiii, may I participate more than once? *angeleyes*

to Steff's picture:

"what can I do...?

This corpse remains me all my weakness again,
there's no way to escape, but I won't surrender this time.

My eyes look intensely to nowhere,
the more pain, the more sorrow comes, the faster I will ran,
and I shall not look behind me anymore...

Full of tears I will close my eyes and run, run free with my feelings...
Love will give me the strenght I need to escape from you
You, death of my heart won't reach me again!

You killed me once, twice....many times,
but now I challenge you,
my wings won't be in fire anymore....

Maybe I am still sitting next to you, but you won't get me anymore...
I know...."

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« Reply #10 on: April 11, 2011, 09:45:34 »
ow ofcourse you may   :D   i'll do it too, as soon as i get my inspiration back   :D
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« Reply #11 on: April 11, 2011, 10:10:05 »
(sorry for joining so late... have been rather busy last week)
To Christina's picture:

The smell of love so deep felt pure,
how often must I cut myself
on its iron thorns protecting the innocence
inside of my beating heart, for you, only;
whispering you my words through the air
hoping you'll catch them and look me
look me in the eyes so tender as ever,
beautiful you are my goddess of love
when I stare into your endlessness
and hope you won't ever die,
hoping is my future, as future is my hope
please, I whisper, don't ever leave me,
for I need you, as I needed anything
ever before, your smell, your words,
your tender touches in my dreams,
and as I let her guide me my way
her leaves dwell upon a breeze of love
and as I open my eyes, awake from the dream
she's still there shining bright in the glory light
of our togetherness, of our closeness, our ...
love.

When you can dream it, you can do it!

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« Reply #12 on: April 11, 2011, 16:13:53 »
"finally" she said and climbed out of her safe shelter. she opened her eyes and the blinding sun light fell over them. she blinked into the newborn world, full of fresh grass, bathing in the golden sunrays. "wuuuu" she wondered and took a very good look at her new clothes. "i has a blue dress" she turned around and spoke to the green leaf which looked like some weird grass. "hey you, you're still the same, my friend  *sad*"  but there was no reply. "heeeeey" she yelled. still only a silence coming as an answer. "you ... you ... youuuuuu ..." she cried. "why you leaves me? why you goes and where you goes? why you silent? why you comes only when i dies? please my friend, you forgets me not ... ever"


 :oops:  :oops:   no inspiration, sorry ...


here's the photo ...

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« Reply #13 on: April 11, 2011, 17:33:53 »
Can I cheat and write for Kitty's photo first?? I saw it earlier but didn't have time to post. :oops:

In blissful solitary confinement, she sat engulfed in a lavender-colored prairie. The Spring sun embraced her as the wind gently blew her hair. She steadily observed the fragile flower laying in her palm. With a gentle stroke she began to tug its petals:

He loves me-he loves me not. He loves me-he loves me not. He loves...

..something is just not right? This final petal was simply not a whole. She then softly spoke, "I don't understand what to think of love if it is just a half." An eerie silent response. Grief-stricken by mother nature, she bitterly held on to the withered petal and began to walk through the field. She could feel the hundred eyes of beauty bestowing pity upon her. The mysteriously faint pupils and their glowing irises.
  What was the matter? What was really the point? Is it misleading to think a flower could tell you your life was a joke? And with a sudden current, the petal wildly flew out her hand. She began to sprint while her bare feet collided with the dewy earth. However, the petal was far ahead dancing in the sky. Twirling and sweeping in the shining light. In bewilderment, she abruptly halted to absorb this show in her sight. A merry smile graced her face:

"He has forgotten me not."

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« Reply #14 on: April 11, 2011, 18:36:23 »
Klodi expresses the spring-element in which this picture is definitely situated =D

anesthesia I was all silent after reading that :) liked it very very much!

To Klodi's picture:

Rain pours over a far-away land, deep down in a fairy tale of nature,
A paradise here on earth drowned in tears from sweet mother soul ;
As raindrops seek their way from one stop till the next ,following arrows,
to the lakes and rivers of the mountain-foot  fairy; passing flowers and trees,
hedges and grasses, insects and warm-blooded, weeds as pure-sense.
Until one catches the eyes of all, one fragrance spread by the earliness of the past storm
shining in darkness, recovering from the heavy shower shaking off all wet,
she starts to sing her song of beauty and freshness sharing her joy and light
with all the green , yellow, blue, purple, red all around, hoping to spread hope
dreaming her dreams together with her fellow-fairies of nature
mystical and pure she stands there in the middle of it all, the spotlight captures her
as she smiles and whispers “we survived it all…”



When you can dream it, you can do it!