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Title: write a story
Post by: Shadows-In-Twilight on April 08, 2011, 14:51:10
hello guys   :)  don't crucify me for what i'm going to say now, but i find our forum a little boring lately with all those old questions and bands topic being up all the time, without a single trace of new topics  *angel eyes*  so, i came up with this idea already a while ago when i did it myself, but wasn't sure if it's good to bring the topic to life. i decided to give it a try anyway.

the point of the topic is that someone, let's say person X posts a picture. person Y writes a story, or a poem, or just a simple thought, a feeling about the photo person X posted, and then this person Y also adds a new photo. person Z posts his/her story about the picture from person Y and posts another photo, and then person W writes blahblahblahblah   :D   got it?   :D   it's not that difficult   :)

so, to start it with an example, i will put here a photo and a story i wrote about it


(http://a4.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/148379_1686999138624_1347032763_1796830_6272208_n.jpg)

i close my eyes. my tears run down my cheeks and die on the cold pavement under my feet. i cannot move on. the pain i feel inside has carved me to the ground. i drop on my knees and cry. cold autumn wind tries to dry my face, but nothing can make me stop grieving. my world has collapsed. my life is gone ... he is gone ... my time has stopped along with his. why him? why not me, why him? life is so unfair ... he just left me here, alone; breaking the promise he made. he will always and forever stay with me, he said ... bullshit! he couldn't have known what was going to happen. but still i believed ...

i look upon the cemetery behind the fence. can't get closer, it hurts too much. i miss his presence ... but he's there, few steps away. he's there, so close. not breathing. not feeling. his eyes are closed forevermore. he's so ... different. calm. sleeping for eternity ... it's not like him ... this life is so cruel!

memories hurt. spirit of the glowing morning dawn. summer twilight. light warm breeze. gentle wind and pouring rain ... everything's gone, covered with pain ...

i love you, i whisper ...
never again ...




next person has to write a story/poem/thought about this photo:  
(http://a8.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/156345_1722181378158_1347032763_1857798_425250_n.jpg)


don't forget, after you write a story about this photo, you also show another picture you want to know the story about   ;)
Title: write a story
Post by: Shadows-In-Twilight on April 09, 2011, 08:51:28
nobody?   :(   yeah well, as expected ...
Title: write a story
Post by: A Elena on April 09, 2011, 09:15:02
You have to wait a little bit, Klo!  :)
Title: write a story
Post by: LadyMalina on April 09, 2011, 09:35:50
Nice topic I have just seen ^^
Well, I don't feel like writing a story, but yes a thought....

"it seems that my life doesn't deserve any light.....
I have had, have and will have lights....but they won't last forever....
The light of love should be eternal, but once and twice and so on I realice that it's weak, so weak and can be switched off so quickly and sudden....."


My picture.

(http://i3.ytimg.com/vi/xkBwhJK739A/0.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: anesthesia25 on April 09, 2011, 23:46:39
Great topic Klo!! :)I really enjoy this idea!
~~~~~~~

Ripples slowly caress the sea water
a fading sun lingers behind the clouds.
Before this time
I saw a lit path in the water-
light that I thought might lead me to you.
I impatiently paced amongst the shore
awaiting to saunter
into waters mysteriously still and deep.
The light only disappeared to cruelly remind me
that you oppose my nature.
And so the sand continues burying me in
as I await for the Northern breeze to carry my heart away
and disperse me through time.




(http://data.whicdn.com/images/4712068/petals,white,dress,violinist,girl,violin,girls-109610cc82d16d2584d226ae4ea08b48_h_large.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: Stephanie Lamas on April 10, 2011, 00:49:29
Let's try it... But I won't rhyme =)

I'm still here, just where you left me...
You took my heart, you took my soul
But you will never take my violin of me!
It's my Breath, just like I called it
So long time ago already
When you were listening my music
Between all those flowers of Spring

You tried to take them as well...
So actually I'm so sorry for you, my dear
Because I'm still watching all those petals
That are coming to me
Each warm morning of my life
To take care of me with such affection
I'm still here, but I'm not waiting anymore.

(http://a7.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash1/22442_1309779419452_1079596361_933707_465890_n.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: anesthesia25 on April 10, 2011, 01:10:00
Steph: I really loved your interpretation!! Very VERY original. :)


Skip me.
Title: write a story
Post by: Stephanie Lamas on April 11, 2011, 00:12:40
Quote from: "anesthesia25"
Steph: I really loved your interpretation!! Very VERY original. :)


Skip me.


Thank you!!!!



Come on, LacriWeltians! This topic is perfect for this forum and I totally agree with Klokloklo! Let's keep with this =)
Title: Heeeeeeey
Post by: Shadows-In-Twilight on April 11, 2011, 08:11:04
so great, everyone      :)     will read them all when i'm not on my phone and when i'm home^^
Title: write a story
Post by: LadyMalina on April 11, 2011, 08:29:24
@Klodiii, may I participate more than once? *angeleyes*

to Steff's picture:

"what can I do...?

This corpse remains me all my weakness again,
there's no way to escape, but I won't surrender this time.

My eyes look intensely to nowhere,
the more pain, the more sorrow comes, the faster I will ran,
and I shall not look behind me anymore...

Full of tears I will close my eyes and run, run free with my feelings...
Love will give me the strenght I need to escape from you
You, death of my heart won't reach me again!

You killed me once, twice....many times,
but now I challenge you,
my wings won't be in fire anymore....

Maybe I am still sitting next to you, but you won't get me anymore...
I know...."

(http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_2ttimXPMndo/SD5E2kU_srI/AAAAAAAAAKk/PYpWPAuWhO8/S660/gothic3007-full.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: Shadows-In-Twilight on April 11, 2011, 09:45:34
ow ofcourse you may   :D   i'll do it too, as soon as i get my inspiration back   :D
Title: write a story
Post by: Kitty on April 11, 2011, 10:10:05
(sorry for joining so late... have been rather busy last week)
To Christina's picture:

The smell of love so deep felt pure,
how often must I cut myself
on its iron thorns protecting the innocence
inside of my beating heart, for you, only;
whispering you my words through the air
hoping you'll catch them and look me
look me in the eyes so tender as ever,
beautiful you are my goddess of love
when I stare into your endlessness
and hope you won't ever die,
hoping is my future, as future is my hope
please, I whisper, don't ever leave me,
for I need you, as I needed anything
ever before, your smell, your words,
your tender touches in my dreams,
and as I let her guide me my way
her leaves dwell upon a breeze of love
and as I open my eyes, awake from the dream
she's still there shining bright in the glory light
of our togetherness, of our closeness, our ...
love.

(http://www.bilder-hochladen.net/files/d2q3-9i.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: Shadows-In-Twilight on April 11, 2011, 16:13:53
"finally" she said and climbed out of her safe shelter. she opened her eyes and the blinding sun light fell over them. she blinked into the newborn world, full of fresh grass, bathing in the golden sunrays. "wuuuu" she wondered and took a very good look at her new clothes. "i has a blue dress" she turned around and spoke to the green leaf which looked like some weird grass. "hey you, you're still the same, my friend  *sad*"  but there was no reply. "heeeeey" she yelled. still only a silence coming as an answer. "you ... you ... youuuuuu ..." she cried. "why you leaves me? why you goes and where you goes? why you silent? why you comes only when i dies? please my friend, you forgets me not ... ever"


 :oops:  :oops:   no inspiration, sorry ...


here's the photo ...

(http://a5.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-snc1/v2642/115/62/1347032763/n1347032763_331702_1136408.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: anesthesia25 on April 11, 2011, 17:33:53
Can I cheat and write for Kitty's photo first?? I saw it earlier but didn't have time to post. :oops:

In blissful solitary confinement, she sat engulfed in a lavender-colored prairie. The Spring sun embraced her as the wind gently blew her hair. She steadily observed the fragile flower laying in her palm. With a gentle stroke she began to tug its petals:

He loves me-he loves me not. He loves me-he loves me not. He loves...

..something is just not right? This final petal was simply not a whole. She then softly spoke, "I don't understand what to think of love if it is just a half." An eerie silent response. Grief-stricken by mother nature, she bitterly held on to the withered petal and began to walk through the field. She could feel the hundred eyes of beauty bestowing pity upon her. The mysteriously faint pupils and their glowing irises.
  What was the matter? What was really the point? Is it misleading to think a flower could tell you your life was a joke? And with a sudden current, the petal wildly flew out her hand. She began to sprint while her bare feet collided with the dewy earth. However, the petal was far ahead dancing in the sky. Twirling and sweeping in the shining light. In bewilderment, she abruptly halted to absorb this show in her sight. A merry smile graced her face:

"He has forgotten me not."

~~~~~
Title: write a story
Post by: Kitty on April 11, 2011, 18:36:23
Klodi expresses the spring-element in which this picture is definitely situated =D

anesthesia I was all silent after reading that :) liked it very very much!

To Klodi's picture:

Rain pours over a far-away land, deep down in a fairy tale of nature,
A paradise here on earth drowned in tears from sweet mother soul ;
As raindrops seek their way from one stop till the next ,following arrows,
to the lakes and rivers of the mountain-foot  fairy; passing flowers and trees,
hedges and grasses, insects and warm-blooded, weeds as pure-sense.
Until one catches the eyes of all, one fragrance spread by the earliness of the past storm
shining in darkness, recovering from the heavy shower shaking off all wet,
she starts to sing her song of beauty and freshness sharing her joy and light
with all the green , yellow, blue, purple, red all around, hoping to spread hope
dreaming her dreams together with her fellow-fairies of nature
mystical and pure she stands there in the middle of it all, the spotlight captures her
as she smiles and whispers “we survived it all…”



(http://www.bilder-hochladen.net/files/d2q3-82.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: Stephanie Lamas on April 11, 2011, 19:23:38
Until she finally looked at the moon and cried.
 Everything vanished suddenly, so he was so far away from her and he couldn't watch how she died at the lake. Even now he's still regretting that; Just one action could had changed everything...
 When he sees the clear moon in nights, he can't help but remember those tears.


(http://a6.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/5500_1186497697486_1079596361_570390_566720_n.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: Kitty on April 11, 2011, 23:20:39
And I wonder why … or how …
And I wonder when … or where…
Before I knew, gone, with the northern sun
Yet locked deep inside my heart,
My passion screams to get out and die
Like you with my last kiss,
My kiss goodbye, forever gone …
No longer can I tell you that I love you,
No longer can I hold you tight and
No longer can you understand me
Without words, without signs.
I’d give you my last breath, for you
To breathe, relive, rise up from the death,
Speak and come back, cause you left
This unbearable emptiness within my chest
Ripping it out has no use for it’ll always
Come back for as long as I live;
For as long as I live, I will love…
Love only you till my death.



(http://a7.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/34209_1463156775064_1117825135_31380962_4370156_n.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: ÖÖ on April 13, 2011, 21:00:59
Isn't it cool - to lie in the middle of the world, when the streets are quiet, looking straigh into the deep blue sky, that is moving as always as time? Greeting the white fluffy clouds above?
Hey, cloud? You look like a plush toy! May I pat you and stroke you?

(http://t2.ftcdn.net/jpg/00/23/95/33/400_F_23953393_70hm38SuLyNVhXEvo96awnrDuprc52o3.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: Shadows-In-Twilight on April 13, 2011, 21:10:54
such a crowd surrounds me ... but yet i feel alone ... so alone ... so damn alone ...  



the picture:
(http://a8.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/217688_1977263355048_1347032763_2318332_363048_n.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: Kitty on April 15, 2011, 09:04:54
soft and tender your appearance is
when you enjoy the spring sunshine
the beams of the sky warming upon your skin.
How come you can enjoy so much those little things
which escape our human minds, every day;
so careless yet caring you go through life,
taking it easy when all the rest of the world
stresses out... panics... drives mad.
with a concerned look you stare around
full of confusion what the fuss is all about
people telling you "DON'T", where you were told
you were free-born, free for each step to take.
Tired of this you no longer care, turn around
search for the flowers in the evening-grey
crawl up, stretch out and fall into a deep sleep,
none can tell you there what's right or wrong,
none can force you there to think on the line
little cat, in the spring-sun, little cat in life,
enjoy your peace and share it with the world!


(http://a3.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc3/15746_1287297178684_1117825135_30906602_7526734_n.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: Shadows-In-Twilight on April 15, 2011, 13:07:39
you want to leave. go away. escape. run away from all the things which have haunted you through all the years of your life. you take the road to unknown. you follow the light and walk the road. you wonder what awaits for you around the next corner. a new life? another failure, disappointment? or maybe, is there the end of it all, when you fall into the blackest darkness of the deepest abyss; when the world turns upside down and then it's gone?

no matter what, you're forever running away, following the light down the frozen road ... where are you going?

nobody knows ...



the picture:
(http://a7.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/198440_1924354632363_1347032763_2239070_6310771_n.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: Stephanie Lamas on April 16, 2011, 02:15:04
Why my wings are so little?
Why God made me like this?
Could you say a word?
Could you tell me what you think?
Do you believe one day I'll fly away from here?
Do you believe there's a place for me out here?
Do you...?



(http://a1.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/10430_1201282747103_1079596361_622435_3673568_n.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: Kitty on April 20, 2011, 23:37:12
"I love you and I'll never forget you" he whispered whilst looking her deep in the eyes. They kissed for what seemed ages and finally had to let go of each others hand; no more nearness.

...

 "I'll never forget you...forget you ... forget you..." it screamed in her head... fiercely she got up and went to the visit as arranged, hoping that her family would still be willing to see her, still willing to give her a place among them. So scared she was, they all warned her what would happen if she didn't follow their advices about education and stupid stuff that didn't interest her at all. She took her bags and jacket and ran out the door, the moment she got outside she already saw him ... adrenaline streaming through her veins, the mixture of happiness and fear ... "this can't be real" ... slowly he came closer and when he yelled her name "Sophia ... Sophia it's me...Sophia, I need you!" ... she walked up to him scared and blurred. When she nearly stood feet to feet with him, his image disappeared leaving just the sweet odour of his perfume lingering in the air.

"... mere dream... just another illusion...yet I know ... one day I'll find you!"


(http://a7.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/5812_1205971425591_1117825135_30649160_2460484_n.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: Tänzerin der Dunkelheit on April 21, 2011, 00:03:40
mist arises slowly.
creeping nearer.
shrouding the nature.
taking away all the colours -
the signs of our love!

when the mist arises
the coldness goes along with it.
the coldness around the arms.
the coldness around the hearts.
where is all the love?

shrouded in mist
our hearts cooled...



(http://images.pixelio.de/data/media/53/Schmetterlinge_Rahmen.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: liliannoturna on April 21, 2011, 03:21:53
i loved this topic XD

well... (sorry for my english again hehehe)

The natural beauty of their colors ..... the greatness of his freedom. The delicacy of his being ... essence of life. She comes back to life. Discovering a world full of colors. showing us their delicate beauty .... His freedom ... I want to fly ...

(http://s014.radikal.ru/i327/1104/8e/67f0c58ff9ed.jpg) (http://www.radikal.ru)
Title: write a story
Post by: Kitty on April 21, 2011, 10:10:46
mesmerizing feeling lingering in the air
the sweet soft vibration of your voice
telling me it's all the same, we're never
never really far apart, never separated.
Staring over the scenery, darkness has come
to take the day away and brought a nightly sky
with moon and stars, with dawn and freshness
after a hot summer's day in mid-august.
Tears roll down when I think of this beauty
which so many take for granted, fade away
so many pass by, careless, without interest
as it's always there, always near, always close.

(http://www.bilder-hochladen.net/files/d2q3-9o.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: Shadows-In-Twilight on April 23, 2011, 08:28:22
i'm walking down the street. it's getting dark. i have all the space in the world, i can go where ever, whenever i want. but yet i feel trapped. these gray walls around me have limited my freedom so long ago, the day i was born. i'm lost in countless streets, this endless lybirinth of humanity. thousands of street lights don't let me see the stars, millions of traffic lights blind me forever ... those sad, gray buildings don't let me see further, beyond the horizon ... will i ever fly free?



(http://a8.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/208635_1999598073402_1347032763_2347926_3148693_n.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: ÖÖ on April 23, 2011, 22:15:07
Mmmm, what a great lot of smells! And all of them so pleasant! I cannot define them, but I like them already! Meow! Is it eatable, what is there? Let me try! I didn't know that life is so impressive!..

(http://greencatina.users.photofile.ru/photo/greencatina/2565020/xlarge/29496560.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: Kitty on May 09, 2011, 07:23:57
shining lonely in the world,
just some cold breeze passing by
and threatening shapes scaring me
I will not move, I will just stand here,
I will not move, I will just breathe deep.

(http://a1.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/34553_1494796086027_1117825135_31461142_3042775_n.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: anesthesia25 on May 23, 2011, 04:04:17
To be there again:
In the reach of crystalline still waters
Fathoming the surreality
Harbored by the setting rays
Coquettishly glistening
Escaping to the enchanting mountains
Reminds me of when I wrote about you
On day a like this
-You
The subtle Northern wind.


(http://i53.tinypic.com/28wgze1.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: Kitty on May 28, 2011, 13:24:57
waiting in darkness to get out of the black hole
silent crawling together hoping for the better
hoping that salvation will come soon
hiding behind the corner, behind the wall perhaps
black smoke, holy smokes, silent waiting.

(http://a5.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/168406_1776532329257_1117825135_32080283_3800236_n.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: Black Metal Girl on June 02, 2011, 09:24:58
tell me please how to add a picture?
Title: write a story
Post by: Kitty on June 02, 2011, 10:59:20
Quote from: "Black Metal Girl"
tell me please how to add a picture?


I've sent you a mail with some info's :)
Title: write a story
Post by: Black Metal Girl on June 03, 2011, 11:27:14
Quote from: "Kitty"
Quote from: "Black Metal Girl"
tell me please how to add a picture?


I've sent you a mail with some info's :)



no,i would like to insert an image here,not the avatar =)
Title: write a story
Post by: Kitty on June 03, 2011, 11:57:10
Quote from: "Black Metal Girl"
Quote from: "Kitty"
Quote from: "Black Metal Girl"
tell me please how to add a picture?


I've sent you a mail with some info's :)



no,i would like to insert an image here,not the avatar =)

That was also explained in the mail I sent you :)
Title: write a story
Post by: Shadows-In-Twilight on June 06, 2011, 16:22:24
well, while you're solving the problem of posting the photo here, i will write something about the last photo posted   :)


sea-waves hit the shore
like the sorrow hits my heart ...
the tide breaks again and again through the laps of time -
so does my life ...




(http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs44/i/2009/129/1/c/the_dead_spot_by_Shadows_in_Twilight.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: Kitty on July 11, 2011, 07:39:14
grief is coming from my heart
tears rushing down my cheeck
without a glance of what past is
without awareness of what we had.

Grief is whirling in my soul
because you're blind for my love
without a glance you rejected me
without awareness of the damage.

Grief is all around my world now
as you comitted suicide in my stead
as you were the light of my soul
you were... and are... my everything.



(http://a7.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/264287_2116489467973_1117825135_32511804_4575573_n.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: ÖÖ on July 11, 2011, 15:28:19
In a stormy night
When all streets are empty
And noone sees
They come to the earth
And walk unnoticed
under the wet trees
Orange lamps look indifferently
at their shadowy forms
They walk through the storm
and make it sure,
that people are safe from the storms

 (http://cs11168.vkontakte.ru/u04796/138184889/x_df80e33f.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: Kitty on July 24, 2011, 09:51:18
In the distance I see people laughing,
walking, talking and enjoying,
in the distance I hear no worried voices,
no citronella faces to ruin the day.
waiting for the ship to take them
to even better resources, they jump
full excitement and their children along,
the sun makes them happy no matter
no matter what clouds may be there.
In the distance I hear the sound
of a leaving ship and I wonder
I wonder where you are now, whether
also you are leaving for a better destination.



(http://a1.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/268818_2154563419798_1117825135_32567299_4309887_n.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: anesthesia25 on September 15, 2011, 18:44:56
My future is moving at the speed of light;
never knowing the final destination.
What awaits at the end of the tunnel?
Is it my dreams?
Is it my hopes?
A dystopia?
Lead the way amber light..
..lead the way.



(http://26.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lrj3est7oI1qifrxwo1_500.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: Shadows-In-Twilight on November 02, 2011, 12:02:06
... maybe this melody will bring you back to me ... not the way you were before you left, not the way you would be now when you were still alive ... maybe this will bring you back to me ... maybe this will bring me back all the memories ... or maybe ... maybe this will bring me to you ... my dear ...


(http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/305/a/8/wrapped_in_the_mists_of_life_by_shadows_in_twilight-d4eonlo.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: Kitty on November 08, 2011, 09:35:12
Travel through times

If sorrow embraces my heart
I run off in all those memories I have
all those smiles embrace me again
and I travel through times to find you back.
What's left of all that once was
is a bitter mark on my old soul
dwelling on time that rushes by
and lonely hiding within the travels of the past.
Taking things as they come, relativating each thing
the darkness in winter, the heath of summer
the sorrow as the happiness I'm feeling
as it's expected from a grown-up
who travels through time to hold on,
to what once was.


(http://www.bilder-hochladen.net/files/d2q3-cs-9b70.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: Shadows-In-Twilight on December 25, 2011, 20:34:33
live your life
don't look back
don't turn around
just follow the light
and follow your heart

live your life
don't ask why
just open your eyes
and follow the light
follow your heart
you'll find it worthwile

live your life
don't turn around
to what you left behind
don't look back
and follow the light -
follow your heart
till the end of your time



(https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/s720x720/397783_2926204797991_1347032763_3179464_891500644_n.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: Eiseskälte on December 27, 2011, 04:03:07
I always considered it as close, though I could never imagine what it could be until I was some months old. I could only see through a thick glass and was never sure if it really was glas or just a painting that they put to entertain me... A funny painting though which was sending light to the room and changed all the time... I liked watching outside, just as they like to watch in the television - bah. That's nothing for me! There everything changes fo fast - Coca-Cola here, New Computer Game there... The only thing I liked in the TV was the advertisments for cat food which were mouthwatering.
Anyhow beyond that glass, always something seeed to happen. Sometimes I even saw relatives and tried to talk with them but they couldn't hear me through the glass... The confusing thing was that I didn't know if they were real or just like another TV...
But one day I could finally leave the house, my family brought me outside and I could see all my relatives and play with them - and since then I can do every day... But not now... Now it is cold and I prefer observing the snow falling from inside, where it is warm and my human family is watching the TV behind me...
Hmmm - Another catfood advertisment ;)

(http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/1813/lfanartdeathnote1911869.jpg)

I hope drawings are also allowed :oops:
Title: write a story
Post by: Shadows-In-Twilight on December 27, 2011, 08:53:09
they told me to swim. just swim, swim on.
they said i have to swim on if i have to reach my goal.
swim through the spring warmth and summer storm,
swim on, through the autumn rain and winter frozen chains ...
swim on to the light, keep swimming to find your own life ...

what they don't know is ... i cannot swim ... not at all ...
i need HER by my side to swim ... i cannot swim without her
she's my light, she's my life, but now she's gone ...
is there a point when i swim on?


(http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/310/b/8/free_your_mind_and_soul_by_shadows_in_twilight-d4f9go5.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: Kitty on December 28, 2011, 20:37:54
Into the Twilight I set myself free
into eternity I keep up my silence
spreading my wings to fly
fly high and away from the burdens of life
far and wide over the sorrows and grief,
I free myself at the end of the day;
I free myself from you...and me.



(https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/s720x720/318476_2360059637075_1117825135_32817031_947111774_n.jpg)
Title: write a story
Post by: Shadows-In-Twilight on December 28, 2011, 20:52:01
they told me not to play games with life. they told me not to lose myself in what i do. they told me ... they told me not to lose control.

i played with life and i lost my own game. i lost myself in an endless stream of sorrow. i lost control. i lost it all in a single flame of lies. i burned my heart. i lost my soul ...  this fire of games and lies ... burnt my life ... to ashes ...


[weird thinking, yes]


(http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/361/6/4/read_my_love_for_you_by_shadows_in_twilight-d4kcpb6.jpg)
Title: Antw:write a story
Post by: Kitty on February 20, 2012, 12:08:24
sealed with a ring,
the words marked on my soul,
no more breath to explain you
over and over again,
the feelings locked up in my being.

Sealed with a kiss,
the mystery love we share,
the bounds unchained to feel
over and over again,
the boundaries of our beings.

(https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/s720x720/403688_3064529648385_1117825135_33172663_626594760_n.jpg)
Title: Antw:write a story
Post by: Shadows-In-Twilight on February 20, 2012, 18:53:18
it's cold and it's getting dark. i'm still running and wandering lost all around the place. where to turn, which way to go? all the traces are lost in snow and i can't remember where i've been before. norther? souther? maybe i was on the east? am i on the west now? no, i can't be ... the sun is setting right infront of me ...

it's so cold ... and i have no place to go ... i'm lost. help?


(http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/007/1/c/shining_love_by_shadows_in_twilight-d4llcia.jpg)
Title: Antw:write a story
Post by: Kitty on March 04, 2012, 23:30:28
Drowning in a far-away dream of what could be,
Longing grows so damn strong inside of me
my heart deludes me in thoughts of sorrow
eventhough love is not meant to hurt
passion not meant to bleed in vein.

As my feet take the steps my heart directs me to,
demanding each strength not to give up on you
blurred memories return of how it was, is and will be
with a setting sun and a rising moon, you are again
the last thought on my mind before I fall asleep.


(https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/15746_1287297538693_1117825135_30906611_5725681_n.jpg)
Title: Antw:write a story
Post by: Shadows-In-Twilight on December 17, 2013, 01:46:36
*brings the topic back from the graveyard*  maybe we could revive this topic?  :)  let me explain the rules again  :)  i post a photo, you write a story or a poem that crosses your mind when you see it, and after that you post another photo, and someone else writes a story/poem about it and posts another photo ... and so on  :)  anyone in for it?  :)

this is the photo  :)

(http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2013/350/2/2/many_stories_i_can_tell_by_shadows_in_twilight-d6y7r22.jpg)
Title: Antw:write a story
Post by: A Elena on January 06, 2014, 22:59:52
When you are old,
I’ll read you poems,
All my unwritten poems… 
And I’ll scent your hands … with blue…


Here is my image:
Title: Antw:write a story
Post by: Sunny on February 08, 2014, 21:40:43
[i]Once walking at leisure
This place or another
I noticed a ray of the sun,
So tender - yet powerful,
Slim - yet so mighty...
It touched my face and was gone.

Then question occured to me:
Why then every hour
We walk this world so blind?
We all see trees, and th' sky is above us...
But do we all notice them? - Nay.
We're all in a hurry, we're all up to something,
Forgetting to live and to fly


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Title: Antw:write a story
Post by: Sunny on February 08, 2014, 21:43:20
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